Blog number 1: https://digitalmediawritingiobm.wordpress.com/2021/02/02/5-quick-tips-to-stop-anxiety-and-reduce-stress/ The reason why I like this blog is because of the way the introduction is done. The first sentence makes me want to read the whole blog. These lines that anxiety is like a monster – living under your bed is the perfect way to connect someone who is going through it. The blog talks about something which is regarding mental health but people within our society don’t take it seriously. Many people suffer from anxiety and stress, but they are unaware of it or are not informed about it because few people take it seriously.
This blog does a great job of explaining anxiety and stress, as well as providing some tips about how to deal with them. People who suffer from anxiety are often unaware of how to deal with it or combat it, but this blog discusses how to do so in a few easy steps. However, Plagiarism wise I found 28% plagiarism in this blog. Blog number 2: https://digitalmediawritingiobm.wordpress.com/2021/02/01/2020-2021-what-has-changed/ The reason I choose this blog is that it discusses an experience that our generation has had and that future generations will reflect on and discuss in 50 years. 2020 was the most difficult year our generation has ever faced. The pandemic changed everything, and it had an effect on everyone's life. I like how the author has not only discussed the pandemic but also other disasters that occurred in early 2020, such as the Australian bushfires, the Beirut Explosion, the Pakistan Airline Crash, and the deaths of several well-known public figures. Both of these events had a profound impact on many families and shook the whole world. I feel like few stats and figures would have made this blog better. A figure would’ve made it easier for someone who isn’t aware about it to read and understand. There was 10% plagiarism.
Blog number 3:
https://digitalmediawritingiobm.wordpress.com/2021/02/01/how-truck-art-can-change-pakistans-tourism/
This article is about how truck art can change tourism in Pakistan, and it was an interesting read for someone like me who appreciates local culture and art. This article appeals to me because it describes how truck art is more than just a way to decorate your truck; it also explains how each of these truck arts has a unique story to tell. For someone coming from yet another country, this opens up plenty of possibilities.
This blog has gone back in the 90’s and talked about how truck art has existed since then, truck art is not something that was picked up on recently but has been happening since many years. The blog explains the history of truck art and how in the early 90’s trucks imported from England started this.
What I think was missing was the art itself; a photo or two of the truck art would have made this blog even better and more understandable for someone who is unfamiliar with truck art and hasn't seen the beautifully decorated trucks in Pakistan.
There was 5% plagiarism.
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